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--- rules:vestiges [2024/10/31 20:48] – mokiie
+++ rules:vestiges [2024/11/17 02:01] (current) – ro
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 ^Vestige \\ Level^Name^Binding \\ DC^Special \\ Requirement|
+|1st|[[:rules:vestiges#a_rak_thunderfist|A'rak, Thunderfist]]|18|Yes|
 |1st|[[:rules:vestiges#the_brutal_fist|The Brutal Fist ]]|18|Yes|
 |1st|[[:rules:vestiges#domu_exalted_dragonslayer|Domu, Exalted Dragonslayer]]|15|Yes|
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 |5th|[[:rules:vestiges#eld-teok_many-armed_betrayer|Eld-Teok, Many-Armed Betrayer]]|27|Yes|
-===== A'rak Thunderfist =====
+===== A'rak, Thunderfist =====
 **Vestige Level:** 1st
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 **Manifestation:** A large sized humanoid appears before the binder in a blinding lightning strike.
-**Sign:** Your eyes turn ice blue and lightning begins to crackle from yourhands.
+**Sign:** Your eyes turn ice blue and lightning begins to crackle from your hands.
 **Influence:** You become irritable and likely to start fights with whoever you feel has slighted you. You also start using short simple and direct sentences that are mostly monosyllabic.
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 __**Bane of Psions:**__ \\
-Your weapons and natural attacks deal an extra 2d6 damage against psionic creatures.\\
+Your weapons and natural attacks deal an extra 2d6 damage against psionic creatures.
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-__**Northman's Might:**__ \\
-While bound to A'rak Thunderfist you are continuously under the effect of the Enlarge Person spell.\\
 ===== Arch-Disciple Tanhik =====
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 //Much like how a snake sheds its skin, Xiuhcoatl would shed his mortal coil many times over the course of his adventuring career. //
-**Legend:**
+**Legend: **Xiuhcoatl came to the Basin as a young, prideful warrior, exiled from his homeland for killing a peer in anger. He was humbled immediately during his first adventure, first being overwhelmed by housecats and then losing for seeking glory instead of freeing his allies. Over the course of their adventures, Xiuhcoatl died and returned no less than three times, each time sporting a different face and a slightly different personality. When the Serpent spirit guide settled behind their eyes and the spectre of Rulership entered their mind, the tension in their soul grew and grew. When he died for the final time, the overtaxed soul shattered, flinging shards across the world.
 **Special Requirement: **None.
-**Manifestation:**
+**Manifestation: **A dark-skinned face rises out of the circle at your feet and rapidly looks this way and that, ghostly afterimages of the same face as a young human, bearded dwarf, half-elf, and goblin following it. Sometimes the head appears to wear a heavy golden crown. A thin green snake slithers out of the circle and wraps itself around the person's neck, and the images stabilize, collapsing into one of the heads you saw before.
-**Sign:**
+**Sign: **Your hair ties itself into a topknot, Xiuhcoatl's sign of contrition, and becomes perfectly symmetrical around the center of your face. Your ears point or unpoint and your facial features subtly alter, rendering your race slightly harder to identify.
-**Influence:**
+**Influence: **Xiuhcoatl's influence requires you to remain humble and not seek out glory or recognition. However, it strengthens any desire you have for the same.
 **Granted Abilities:**
 **//__Dwarven Echo__ // ** \\
-You are proficient with dwarven waraxes urgroshes. Additionally, you gain a +2 bonus to fortitude saves against poison.
+You are proficient with dwarven waraxes urgroshes. Additionally, you gain a +2 bonus to fortitude saves against poison and darkvision out to 60 feet.
 **//__Goblin Echo__ // ** \\
-You gain a +2 bonus to your dexterity score and darkvision out to 60 feet.
+You gain a +2 bonus to your dexterity score and a +1 bonus to your attack rolls.
 **//__Half-Elf Echo__ // ** \\
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